I was walking through a hedge maze, as you do when I saw a black banana. It was quite damaged and when I went to try to pick it up it was very heavy. I jumped over the banana and kept on walking through the maze. I was following the number 1 rule of all mazes, hug the left wall. It took me about 3 weeks but I finally made it to the middle where a prize was waiting for me. The prize was a plastic bottle but I refused to take it as we need to save the turtles.
i like how you use a lots of details
ReplyDeleteHi Maxwell,
ReplyDeleteWell done for sharing your writing with the challenge this week. There were lots of interesting details in your tale, I can imagine spending 3 weeks in a maze was quite an epic adventure. Make sure you give your reader enough information about the important events. Keep on writing.
Mrs Moore Team 100 London